Aiming at Your Dreams

Description: 

One stitch in time saves nine.
Never too late to start right!

5 Common Styles of Essay to Avoid Deferral or Rejection:

  1. non-committal style: without a thesis
  2. garbling style: mispresenting
  3. shunning style: evasive
  4. rambling style: wide-ranging
  5. gobbling style: high-pitched

We use the best proven algorithm to construct and streamline your essays, by blending your thesis with your awards and extracurricular in perfect order, which will keep your application alive after rounds of heated debate among the admission officers.

Now, here is the announcement: "Admission approved," at the end of the meeting.

Your personality is the vessel, your ability is the engine, your will is the steering wheel.

We are a professional architect and strategist to shape up the vessel, plug in the engine, and align the steering wheel for your win. 

All the top schools will size the vessels, and gauge the engines and steering wheels. They would love to see if this lucky pick turns out to be a super tanker 10 or 15 years later.

"Colleges want to see a demonstrated track record of success (test scores, transcripts, awards), but that isn't enough. They want to truly understand you. What makes you tick? What are your goals and dreams? How do you envision yourself realizing these dreams? Most importantly, why are you special, and why do you deserve admission when 95% of the total applicant pool will ultimately face rejection? If they cannot find the answer to these questions, this application will sit on the bench first."

Congratulations to Eric, winning EA into U Penn before Christmas!

Note: Eric is currently a senior at Maggie L. Walker Governor’s school, Richmond, VA. As a National Merit Scholarship Semi-Finalist, he scored 1560 in SAT. He used to join our summer camp in the year of 2019 and 2020. He then continued to work with our College Admission Services. 

Director: Michael Li, Columbia Univ. (Computer Science)

Essay support team:

  • Charlie, Columbia Univ. (English/Literature)
  • Elena, Duke Univ. (Literature/Psychology)
  • Katherine, Rice Univ (Psychology/Sociology
  • Kez, U. of Chicago (Literature/History)

We are helping the current seniors to get ready for the applications in 2023.

About the services:

Most talented applicants receive a less than deserved result not for lacking the qualifications -- but rather for failing to identify and execute the perfect application strategies.

As a contender, you must answer the most difficult question: "Why do I, not others, deserve their attention?"

The gatekeeper is expecting a good story about the candidate, and the school is going to invest on the winner in the next four years.

All the applicants must have worked hard enough throughout high school. It is time to put the achievements and advantages on the table.

We are here to help the mindful few to follow a unique approach to the dream school in four (highly confident) directions: pre-med, computer science, economics/business, and pre-law.

With our guidance, the applicant will take mission-critical Early and Regular application approaches. With our team's help, the applicant will rediscover his or her powerful inner voice and radiate confidence throughout the written and spoken (interview) portions of the application.

About the director:

Mr. Michael Li was awarded admission to Case Western Reserve University's prestigious 8-year combined BA/MD medical program with a full scholarship. He then chose to attend Columbia University instead and graduated in 2009 with a Bachelor's degree in Computer Science. Throughout and in the years after his college career, Mr. Li has shared his knowledge and enthusiasm to successfully advise many aspiring applicants.

For those who are high academic achievers, you MUST deliver the following in order to secure your bid:

  • a vivid statement of your desire
  • an appealing description of your distinguishable qualifications, reflective of your personality
  • an open bright tone to display your confidence and warm personality during the interview if required

Our team is here to ignite your ambitions, architect your plan, and help streamline your essay with a smooth and clear flow through each word, sentence, and highlight.

Be prepared to submit your essays drafts to receive stimulating and insightful comments.

Each essay will be polished/reviewed 3 (three) times before shining.

This process will make your essay resonate, grab attention, and difficult to put down.

Our team support including timely consultation/zoom meetings will continue until your last application has been submitted. 

All these efforts are worthy of your lifetime dream. 

 

SKU: SU-College-App
Needed for assignments/quizzes
We will help you create a unique thematic personal storyline, powerful flow, high and low, with indelible climaxes.